Thursday, April 2, 2015

the could'ves

We could
Have had the thing
That thing everyone wants
But years and self-doubt caused you to
Settle

3 comments:

  1. Tell me that's a good thing.

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    1. It is a good thing. You are using the cinquain to full advantage. The short form forces you to trim the extra. I was hit with the emotion of it full force.

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